oh cool dude! You can play piano!!!! I think this song is very close to perfection! unlike me.... You're a beautiful person, in and out ;) You are the epitome of talent and refuge. Why do i say refuge? Because your music makes me feel safe and secure. Thanks to you and your music i feel like hope is not the cliche word used to describe optimism, but is now perpetually prevalent. In other words, it makes me happy. Thank you Corbet for this beautiful expression of love for your son. You piano man. Have a great day!
Great work man! What a journey! i feel that this piece can go to great lengths! in my opinion i would like to hear the brass come in at the minute mark, but make it subtle. it just needs a little extra oommf so the listener will stay interested. i love the call and response going on during that part as well! very good job! also, just to spice things up, i would slightly change the low string ostinato during the second section so its not so repetitive. Still keep the the same feel or sound just make it different slightly. Great job mate!
These are some good suggestions, though at this point, I'm kind of scared of messing with the piece again lol (especially since it's so close to the deadline, and I'm essentially out of time).
I have been playing piano for three years, all self-taught and guitar for a year and a half. I started making Making music around my third year of playing piano. I really enjoy making music and want to make it my profession.
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